Deadline 14: Peer Review B

And here is my final peer review! I am officially caught up with all blog posts. I reviewed Eren Arbac’s Content Outline.

Audience Question: How did you practice your editorial skills this week in peer review?

Author Response

I reviewed Eren Arbac’s “Content Outline”. I made an outline suggestion. While her outline included a lot, describes a lot of evidence, and included all the elements in the outline, it still needed a little more information. I helped her get ideas on how to expand her ideas by asking questions and by suggesting the inclusion of more evidence, more ideas on how to grab the reader’s attention, and more ideas on how to explain the significance.

Her outline did a grand job of outlining. I understood everything she intended to talk about, everything she intended to use to support her ideas, and how she was going to begin and end her essay.